hey..good to know you are out there creating...
i know its a rough, but here is what i picked out...
i feel like the kick is weak, the bass and drum sounds are a bit too filtered, and most of the sounds, even the bassline are coming out of mostly the left channel...other than that, it sounds good, it has potential. i would personally like to see more tweaking of the bass sounds, a little less linear programming, as in the formulaic 16 bar sound, 16 bar new sound etc. add some unexpected tweaks or glitches, and youll have a trippier, more 'psychedelic' sound...

keep it up!